My Boring Comic <_<

Well i made this comic heres the first one.

This look kinda good.. But theres something I need to ask..

What the heck is going on?? You can't understand a thing!

Originally Posted by Sigve

What the heck is going on?? You can't understand a thing!

Well once the picture loads, there is a maximize button on the lower right hand corner of the picture. Click on that, and then you'll be able to read what's going on.

I have one advise to give you trinest: I know that this is the begining, but if you want to catch your reader's eye, somehow make the plot interesting enough that we'd like to continue... Some typo errors, but you'll get the hang of it. Keep it up!

-BGS

WhoaH!
I loved the first background, and the other back was also cool..
And I liekd how all the bowser sprites aren't the same..
Nice job on the graphics..
But the storylines could be better though..
Good luck! Serioussly!

It's good. But I don't really get the comics. The backround looks very nice.


Also, will there be more?

Background was great and the sprits were also alright. The story needs to be improved for sure, then you have a nice comic going there.

I just woke up and i made more.
Oh keep in mined my comics are werid <_<

Comic3

It was to big to upload <_<

LOL that was great...very good...keep making them cause there wonderful.Its alittle understand but the graphics and the backrounds are really neat. Good job

Hay i did another one ^_^

Its easy to read the text, but you can't understand what the crap is going on.

Who is saying what, and what the fack are they doing??!

Originally Posted by Sigve

Its easy to read the text, but you can't understand what the crap is going on.

Who is saying what, and what the fack are they doing??!

I'm sorry Trinest, but Sigve has a point. I like your Bowser and Zelda character sprites, but other than that, I have no idea what's going on in your comic. Would you care to explain what's happening thus far in your comic before posting a new one, please?

-BGS

Well seeing my other computer is giving me problems "the computer cant let you login interactivitly" and the fact the sprites are on that one i will telll you whats happing.

Comic 1. The guy thats reading the story or something is dumb and stuff then the girl asks the guy for the sword that appered

Comic 2. There lost so there looking for a map <_< but the map thay find is the wrong map...

Comic 3. Well the guy fells sick then the creatures drop eggs on him then the old guy gives him a gameboy thing and tells him its better then a fairy

Comic 4. The old guy was going to tell them something but he started drinking tea then he got sick and died while the other characters are fighting.

Yeh, what the others said is true.
I liked comic 3 best, but like the others said, hard to make out.
I understand you are having a few problems with your computer mate, I know the feeling.

Originally Posted by lost lee

Yeh, what the others said is true.
I liked comic 3 best, but like the others said, hard to make out.
I understand you are having a few problems with your computer mate, I know the feeling.

lol i have to use dads till he wakes up and logs in on mine

I still don't understand it... THere isn't any plot at all, is there?

I suggest you read some of the realy good spritecomics out there for some advice..

www.bobandgeorge.com
http://quint.panelmonkey.org
www.kabutroid.com/planetzebeth

trinest, once you get your computer working and all: If you make more comics, please make sure one can see who's saying what. As it is now, there are only some squares with text that could've been said by anyone. I'm sure it will be a little bit easier to understand if you actually could see who it was that was talking.