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Old 07-21-2004, 02:24 PM
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Poems for the Lost and Confused

I'm going to start posting my poems in here also, in addition to in my Livejournal....

Here's the first

You're the only one
who's ever made me feel that way.
You're the only one
who I wish I could've taken away.
until that day came
when you loved me too.
But it was too late,
I'm over you.

One day you'll feel for me
like I felt for you.
and you'll wish you'd said
"I love you too".
But that day came
when you loved me too.
You were too late
I was over you.

All that time
I thought I was over you.
But now I know
I still love you too.
That day came
when you loved me too.
I wish I'd said
"I still love you"


INSPIRATION - Degrassi...the episode had a singing, and I heard a line...and it gave me the idea to write that song...its the first one that I actually have music for...I love it...my best work ever...
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Old 07-28-2004, 01:19 AM
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Re: Poems for the Lost and Confused

I'm not very well-versed in poetry but this is quite good. I enjoyed all of it. I'd like to hear the music that goes with it. I don't really have much else to say, besides, 'I'd like to see more of your work'.
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