The Golden Hero

My first Fan Fic, enjoy (just the intro):

After the great Hero of the Winds was nothing more than a legend. After the Great Peace that covered the land diminished, and evil once agian twisted its way in to the hearts of the very decendants of the people that worked so hard to throw it away. An evil broke out of its seal of stone and sets out over a land already grasped by darkness. The world is easily placed into his hand.

But, With every evil there is a hero. Link, the legend him self is called apon and is once agian incarnated to vanquish this evil. He is blessed with the legendary Master Sword, control over powerful magic, and undoubted courage. After several trials of his courage and determination he confronts Ganondorf. But, during the battle of Evil and Greatness something that was never to happen, did. The Master Sword, the sword of evil's bane shattered at the hand of our Hero. Link, using all means to defeat the enemy found himself defeated. It seemed nothing was left to oppose the Master of Evil.

Ganondorf now rid of his mennace, set himself to dispose of the Sages and control the Triforce. He calls apon all evil to create him a monster. A monster that no land has ever seen, one that sweeps his hand and all is lost, one, that only can be found from the bowls of Hell. After many painstaking hours of rituals and cerimonies, the ultimate evil is summond. But this evil could not be controlled by Ganondorf and in the end, Ganondorf is vanquished by his own creation.

The sages, not wanting to let their great land fall, called apon the three Goddesses in their time of need.
The Goddesses decided to help the Sages, and the land they created. Nayru, Goddess of Wisdom, gave the sages a hero. A Golden Hero, one whose bloodlines were that of The Hero of Time and The Hero of the Winds. Farore, Goddess of Courage, grated the Hero hope, courage, and the faith that was neccisary to quash the Master of Evil. Din, Goddess of Power, forged a sword using the Goddess's own golden blood, capible of destroying any Evil that gets in its path, properly wielded.

That hero is The Golden Hero, Kash. With great perserverace, the Golden hero sets out to find a master willing to train him. One whose skills and techniques are capible of vanquishing the ultimite evil. But until that master is found the Hero only has instinct to rely on.
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I'm doing what the topic says, Giving this whole creativity thing a whirl.
Personally, i think it's too cliched, but maybe it hasn't been done before...
All i want here is honest opinions, help, general critique.