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06-24-2004, 08:00 PM
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Best Song Ever to be Written in Ten Seconds
I wanted to write a song REAL bad last night. So I typed in random stuff that rhymed and look what I got. took about ten seconds to write, same as this thread. As you can tell I'm a little rushed today.
my heart is bleeding make it stop trouble breathing so messed up cannot find the strength i need cannot fight the hate in me take me back pick me up hold me close and thats enough
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06-25-2004, 02:12 AM
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Re: Best Song Ever to be Written in Ten Seconds
Seems a lil bit depressed lyric...
It's pretty good tho.... could a rock song lyric 
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06-25-2004, 10:10 AM
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Re: Best Song Ever to be Written in Ten Seconds
i may twist it as it goes on and turn it into a song about overcoming depression through love or something...but we'll see
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06-25-2004, 04:10 PM
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Re: Best Song Ever to be Written in Ten Seconds
If you would take your time a bit it would be pretty cool, I think...
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