"Zelda the Anime, TP" Recruiting now!

Ya, what's up with that?

Besides, you obviously don't know what you're getting yourself into.

This thread is still going on!?

Look. The two narcissistic pessimists.
Are you brothers or sumthin'?
You just bash his good ideas, and have some fun making a kid cry.
You're a sick puppy.
Do you rip off cat's ears in your spair (sic) time?
Sad, sad, sad.
To think, you don't have anything better to do.
The Metal? Go back to preschool. You need to learn who to stop making the other children cry.
Twilightwolf? You give TP a bad name. Go chew on a bone.
If you want to stay, that's fine, but don't spend your surplus of time hurting the feelings of a noob. (I know I'm one 2.)
He's gonna be the next Virginia Tech. Gonna come and shoot you and The Metal while you're making out.
So, get a hobby, both of you.
Valhelm Ries out.

Originally Posted by Tazryl

If people ignore what they find wrong with the work, how is the writer supposed to learn? If someone points out bad grammar, then fix it ASAP. Reading something with terrible grammar becomes tedious. It draws your reader away from the story and on the grammar. They might have to reread a sentence or two to understand what you are trying to say.

Stories with terrible grammar and misspellings are turn offs. First impressions leave a lasting mark. When I read the first chapter of that story, I wanted to stop. It was just terrible.

You WANT people to go medieval ony our stories, disecting it with a microscope. I would LOVE it if someone would do that for my stories. I get a few comments saying how good the story was, but that does little to help me. I thank them for encouraging me, as it is a real pickme up, but only take their comments lightly.

Having your readers ignore what they dislike doesnt benifit you in the slightest. In fact it only gives you an oversized ego.

also the Link pun died years ago. Its also annoying when people point it out.

Have you checked your pm's this morning? Don't worry, it is a lot better than the other one.

Originally Posted by Queen Kara of Pen Island

A Zelda anime isn't needed, there's already a manga. If Nintendo wishes to make an anime in the future, they will and they will get it done by professionals who know what the hell they're doing.

I will now never look at this thread again, because you comparing Avatar to DBZ in art style on the first page.

Hmm..guess that's true, but they're both anime. Maybe if I could get a pitition,....haha just kidding.

Originally Posted by Valhelm

Look. The two narcissistic pessimists.
Are you brothers or sumthin'?
You just bash his [b]good[b]ideas, and have some fun making a kid cry.
You're a sick puppy.
Do you rip off cat's ears in your spair (sic) time?
Sad, sad, sad.
To think, you don't have anything better to do.
The Metal? Go back to preschool. You need to learn who to stop making the other children cry.
Twilightwolf? You give TP a bad name. Go chew on a bone.
If you want to stay, that's fine, but don't spend your surplus of time hurting the feelings of a noob. (I know I'm one 2.)
He's gonna be the next Virginia Tech. Gonna come and shoot you and The Metal while you're making out.
So, get a hobby, both of you.
Valhelm Ries out.

Funny you mention your screen-name, it's the local of my new fan fic pronounced as Ven-helm, before you ask it does hit a lot closer to home this time. And I'll admit Tryzl's advice is truely the only helpfull when regarding the grammer exct. of course this is what I'm talking about,
Zelda Universe Legend of Zelda:Mystery of Link

I'm still bouncing the title around a bit, but it's only been on the site for a few hours and it already has two reads. Where my other one was there for weeks without a single read.
And although it's not perfect, it's a(pardon my french) hell better than the other one. Although I forgot to grammer and spellcheck it this time. Both in writing and being Zelda based. Ven-helm is on the other side of the "world" of Hyrule accross the ocean. Here's the plot in a nutshell

In ocorina of time, Link found out his mother died because of the great war. In my story sense Ganondorf is finally dead for good,(shortly after TP) he's got one last quest to take on. And that's finding out about his Father (who's NEVER mentioned in any game) and who killed his mother, along with who started the great war in the first place! But as always, things are never as simple as they seem to be in Hyrule.

I'm still looking for ideas for the main villan, he's a lot stronger and more leathal than Ganondorf. And you won't believe what you're reading when you find out who the bad guy is...oops but "that would be telling wouldn't it?" haha. Just wait and see,

Also, thanks for sticking your neck out Venhelm. I feel a bit more confident now, haha although...I wouldn't go to that extream to get revenge.

Originally Posted by Valhelm

Look. The two narcissistic pessimists.
Are you brothers or sumthin'?
You just bash his [b]good[b]ideas, and have some fun making a kid cry.
You're a sick puppy.
Do you rip off cat's ears in your spair (sic) time?
Sad, sad, sad.
To think, you don't have anything better to do.
The Metal? Go back to preschool. You need to learn who to stop making the other children cry.
Twilightwolf? You give TP a bad name. Go chew on a bone.
If you want to stay, that's fine, but don't spend your surplus of time hurting the feelings of a noob. (I know I'm one 2.)
He's gonna be the next Virginia Tech. Gonna come and shoot you and The Metal while you're making out.
So, get a hobby, both of you.
Valhelm Ries out.

The Metal Uber Alles!

Are you living in some retarded fantasy world? If he's cried over this, then I have lost what little respect I've had for him. And A gay joke? Yeah, you a n00b alright.

Hey, The Metal? You never answer my question. Why do you consantly insult Zfan? Why do you spend the life you don't have bullying him?
Even you must have better things to do.

I love it how you ignored my post and just started complaining about how I didn't answer your questions. And I don't constantly insult him, I've actually given him some good reason as to why this wont work, but it appears you're going to ignore them. Oh and saying I don't have a life just proves you're too stupid to come up with a better argument. Instead of trying to get me to believe that this is possible, you just come up with retarded insults that I'd expect from a child. Seriously, why is it that you cannot address my arguments, and counter argue?

Oh, and I know that you and zfan121 have engaged in manlove on three separate occasions. lolollololololololololol

Honestly, I don't see the point of this. No one likes his idea, except for you. It will phail, and your going to make a bad name for yourself here.

Originally Posted by Valhelm

Look. The two narcissistic pessimists.

Obviously you don't know the meaning of the word narcissistic. You were just trying to impwess us. Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.

If you weren't in wherever you are, I'd strangle you.

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Wow, your sophistication is amazing.

Ja, it iz.

Originally Posted by The Metal

Wow, your sophistication is amazing.

Haha dude, he's twelve. This level of conversation is still beyond him, let him be x)


Valhelm, I was gonna ask you why you're behaving like an eleven year old, but it all makes sense now.

Why not settle this over a nice cup of tea around a round table as the bunnies do?
All I see here is some rabbit fighting.

Let us all have a teaparty and eat some kind of pudding and end this conflict nowz!

Funny bunny.

Originally Posted by Valhelm

Look. The two narcissistic pessimists.

Look. The preaching noob.

Are you brothers or sumthin'?

No. But I could ask the same question about you and Zfan.

You just bash his good ideas, and have some fun making a kid cry.

No, we tell him why they won't work. You, on the other hand, have done nothing but ***** about me and The Metal this whole thread.

You're a sick puppy.

No, I am not.

Do you rip off cat's ears in your spair (sic) time?

No.

Sad, sad, sad.
To think, you don't have anything better to do.

You know what the irony of this statement is? You're posting on the bloody internet.

The Metal? Go back to preschool. You need to learn who to stop making the other children cry.

Apparantly, you're one of those kids.

Twilightwolf? You give TP a bad name. Go chew on a bone.

I don't even like TP.

If you want to stay, that's fine, but don't spend your surplus of time hurting the feelings of a noob. (I know I'm one 2.)

Look mate, we're not going to sugar-coat our words here. If he didn't want us criticizing his ideas, he shouldn't have posted them here for us to see.

He's gonna be the next Virginia Tech. Gonna come and shoot you and The Metal while you're making out.

Being a bit dramatic, aren't we?

And resorting to gay jokes? Kid, by doing that, you have destroyed any shred of maturity that I thought you may have.

So, get a hobby, both of you.

More hypocrisy.

Valhelm Ries out.

Thank god.

EDIT:

If you weren't in wherever you are, I'd strangle you.

Listen, kiddo, making death threats doesn't make you look "cool". Instead, it makes you look like an immature moron.

So.....forget it then. I'll start a different thread about my stories. Ugh, at least I can agree with you on ONE thing, his reaction was overdramatic. Being an instigator is fun, until someone gangs up on you.