the universal war

hey guys,

I'v created a completely new sci-fi story completely on my own (except a friend of mine helped a little with one chapter) check out the story on the site and if you think that its a good idea and you want to make stories off of it then goto its forums and pm me (gandor) also I'm going to be needing moderators, so there's a good chance you could get that. Also I need someone to edit the forum skin to look good. One other thing is I made the story a while ago so the grammar is bad and the writing style needs to be fixed and I used the word "then" too often. But I could really use your guys's help so check out
http://www.freewebs.com/gorzordians/

thank you
-sheikboy