Ooooo, so creepy. As you know, I love dark writing, and this hits the spot, baby. Dead children, yay! As another commentator said, it does have a sort of old speech to it, classical, call it what you may. Much different than my style, of course. Outdoing me as usual, you scoundrel.
Anyway, I have to say, keep this fic going. It's looking to be the best work you've ever done. That's raising the bar since...well, the very last thing you did. ^^;;