I agree with Cal on the hair - it does remind me of Nayru, but that doesn't make the picture any less fantastic! The line art is extreamly clean ... um, how do you do that? With ink or computer? I'd think ink. I've never known how artists do such things. ^-^; *feels rather silly*

Once again, your creativity is shown. :]

Although, in this one the poses do indeed look very tight. Usually if I sketch, I try to keep the lines as free and loose as possible, esspecially on folds. The boot to the left (our left) looks a little too straight and stilt like (the folds being slightly out of place cause this). Although it's obvious you draw characters with very slim features, giving some definition to limbs and muscles would really enhance your art even more!

Seriously though, what I'm saying is simply advice - I'm not an accomplished artist either, just a fellow enjoier of the hobby as of now.

EDIT: The same thing goes for your new picture of the horse and the rider - as tough of a position that was to draw I'm sure. Try and round out some of the ends and joints of the horse. And I think the horse is just a little too big. But great concept.

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