Succinct is the best way to describe this profile. *Chuckles* While the strengths/weaknesses sections are fairly amusing, you shouldn't isolate it only to psychological weaknesses. Think combat as well. How could your character be overpowered? Is her strength/defense/speed/magic/intelligence low? Things like that. Fix the expand on the strengths/weaknesses, and you've got yourself an approval.

Also, you might want to have your brother look over the profile and fix any typos or grammar errors. Good luck. ^^

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