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Originally Posted by Blind Swordsman
They're both pretty good. I like the second the best so far. If you've got mor, be sure to tell us!
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alright! how about this one? ( i know it's not as great as the others, it was real noisy in the room while i was writing it, so it was hard for me to concentrate) here goes.....
I hold a sword of courage, and a sheild to block the wraths.
The wraths of the impure that should obstruct my path.
Like a sickness gone uncured, I must not turn my cheek
from the evil in this world while saving those so weak.
A strong heart I must have, if I wish to proceed,
saving innocence in danger. it's for them i will bleed.
I depend on nothing but courage alone, and it is not faulty, it is mine to own.
I don't think that one was anywhere near as good as the others, but since it was about Link, I just decided to post it. any suggestions on how to make it better?
