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Old 06-25-2006, 06:29 PM
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Re: Broken Tree-The Poetry of NC
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Originally Posted by Szerenade
Welcome to Poetry Wonderland, NobleCucco!

Broken Tree is truly moving, flowing, and has some very beautiful imagery. In particular, these lines caught my attention:

I would have expected to "wipe up his tears", have "memories of grief" and "stains of tears"; but you expressed them in different ways.

Protector is simple but sweet. I especially enjoyed these lines:
Thank you

I've got a new one..so here ya go, it's short.

My Rose
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I want a rose...
one with no thorns...
one with many pedals...
ones of love and not of scorn.


Read...comment....enjoy...repeat as needed....


-NC
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