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Old 06-24-2006, 05:45 AM
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Final Chapter

Jabel took a good swing at Jing but Jing took a step back to keep his flesh on his bones. Jing grabbed Jabels arm and started to twist. Jabel side rolled to prevent a broken bone in his arm, then he tried to finish this fight quick and cut off his head, but Jing barely dodged the katana and it’s intentions but he lost a strand of his black hair. Jing used his sword to try and cut off Jabels arm, which was still in his grip. Jabel did the smart thing by head-butting Jing in his chest, knocking the wind out of him temporarily. Jabel ran and hid behind some of the benches. Jing came running after him. Jing looked all around but he couldn’t find him. Jing decided to sit down for a rest.

Jabel was behind the bench that Jing was sitting on. Jabel stood up slowly, then tried to end it all with his sword, yet Jing knew that Jabel was behind him, and he blocked it without looking. Jing punched Jabel in his face, but Jabel retaliated with a loud slap to the cheek. Jing tried to punch Jabel again, but Jabel blocked it with his katana. Jings hand was now cut open, but Jing didn’t seem to be affected by it. Jing tried to punch Jabel with his good, left hand. But Jabel ducked this time, but on his way back up, Jing connected with his bloody, right hand. Jabel had Jings blood on his face.

People from the town that were in the cages along the wall kept chanting for Jabel. Jing told them to shut up, but they kept chanting. Jing went up close to the cage and stuck his sword in it, trying to make a threat of it. Meanwhile, as Jing was busy with the towns people, Jabel ran up to the balcony. Jing realized that he took his eyes off of his opponent. He looked around and again couldn’t find Jabel anywhere. He finally looked up, to see Jabel jumping off the balcony with his sword pointed down. Jing thought fast, he rolled out of the way and then took a swing. He was lucky too, he cut Jabels leg. Jabel screamed in pain.

Jing then jumped on Jabels shoulders. Jabel ran and hit Jing against one of the steel cages, which were as big as a prison cell, and 10 people were in each one. Jing was unconscious because he hit his head on the cage. Jabel realized that he could end this now, but he didn’t want to. Jabel climbed on top of one of the cages, just long enough for Jing to wake up. Jing woke up to the absence of Jabel. Jing heard Jabel walking on top of the cage as he woke up though, but he forgot all about that. Jing went directly upstairs because that is where he though Jabel was. Jabel wasn’t up there, but Jing was higher up than the cages and found Jabel. Jing jumped as far as he could to get onto the cage, and he made it.

Jing went up to Jabel and attempted to kick Jabel in his ribs, but Jabel wittingly hit the deck and grabbed Jings feet and pulled, tripping him and hitting the back of his head on the steel roof. Jabel quickly got up, then he jumped and dropped his knee to Jings neck. Jing made those noises of struggled breathing for a few seconds, but he kept getting up. After Jing got up, tried to hit Jing in the stomach with his katana, but Jing kicked the sword out of Jabels hands. Jabel was worried now, but he jumped down to get his katana. Jing followed Jabel as Jabel ran around trying to find his katana and avoid Jing at the same time

Jing finally caught up to Jabel, and wasted no time by continuously hitting Jabel in his face. Jabel finally had enough, he dropped to his aching knees and punched Jing in his groin as a desperate move. Jabel used that precious time with Jing on his knees grabbing his groin to find his sword. He found it right beside one of the cages. But when Jabel turned around, he saw Jing charging his way over his general direction. Jabel then, in fear, did the impossible. He ran so fast that he ran straight up the wall, with Jing still on his tail. Jabel stuck his katana in the back of his rags pointing down. Then Jabel stopped running up the wall and started to fall, but Jing was still running up the wall.

Jabels sword made contact with Jings shoulder, but that was Jabels worst mistake. Jing now had his own sword, and Jabels katana. Jabel did the right thing and ran for his life. Once he made his way onto the stage, Jing decided to end it fast with two stabs to the chest. Jabel did a back bend to dodge one sword, but the other one cut his ear. Jabel kicked Jings legs out from under him, and Jing hit his face onto the tree stump. Jabel collapsed from exhaustion, and he thought that this would be his last battle. But Jabel saw something, but his now blurry vision couldn’t make it out. But what was really happening, was that the woman that was supposed to be sacrificed had the axe in her hand, and she used all the courage that she had and used that axe to behead Jing.

It was all over, but Jabel needed to set the people of the town free. He tried to pick the lock with his sword, but it didn’t work. He tried using his power move, but Jabel didn’t have enough energy or strength. But he though of something, Jabel walked over to Jings body. He looked at the part of the neck that was attacked to the shoulders, the key around his neck was still there. Jabel took the key and used it on the locks, and it worked. Jabel let them free, cage by cage. He led down the hallway, he found the two guys Jabel fought off. Jabel picked their pockets and found those things that they through into the bushes for a portal. Jabel used those and threw them into the fire place in the middle of the room, and everyone followed him.

The portal went to Durina, Jings village. Jabel led them all back to their town from Durina. Jabel stayed there for one more week to recover, then he had to go back to his duties as the chosen one.


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