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Old 06-23-2006, 11:02 AM
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Re: Zeeku

Weight-150 what? tons? pounds? kilograms? grams?

Expand on strengths and weaknesses. And I don't mean adding elements like water and fire to those, I mean...what is he good at? What is he not good at?

Expand on that appearance. It is nowhere near enough. And if you must, simply find a picture of a zora.

Expand on personality. A lot.

And...the bio is fine, except that it is short. I want you to work on making it bigger.
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