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1) I've never heard of a dagger with a foot-long blade before...maybe six inches would be better?
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Dagger magically reduced to seven inches
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2) Every last spell needs a downside. Several of them do not. Change that.
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done.
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3) Your Bio needs a reality check. No six-year-old kid could possibly learn how to use a bow; even in the Middle Ages, that didn't happen 'til ten or twelve. Also, nine-year-olds are not spellcasters of any degree, and seventeen-year-olds would certainly not be skilled.
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It it ok If I put that he was using a child's bow when he was six. One that has a low pull strength (about 20 pounds compared to 40-80 pounds of a regular bow) and only shoots 15 feet, and he did not use a regular bow until he was 11.
Poe started practicing magic when he was 14. The spell he cast when he was nine was an accident, Keep in mind that he is an elf not human. I also added that he can only cast two to three strong spells before the spells he can cast become weak.
also I added this paragraph to the magic section.
When it comes to casting spells Poe has energy that is stored in his body and is used to cast a spell. The energy slowly recharges after a spell is cast, and the longer the parson is casting spells the more energy he has and the more a person cast a certain spell the less energy he needs to cast it. Poe only has enough energy to cast two or three spells if he casted them at their full power. If he weakens the spells he can cast four or five spells before he runs low on energy.