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Originally Posted by Szerenade
These are great poems! Sour Apples is simple but contemplative. The wind of Today the door of Tomorow has very beautiful metaphors. Untitled is optimistic, and I think the ending is well-written, anyhow. Stretching out that line feels like you're holding on to the warmth and happiness, longer than the darkness.
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thanks, i never really thought that far into it. that's a realy interestint way you said about the darkness.