Alright, I found a few more things:
1) Weaknesses. He just needs more. Is he slow? Is he smart? Is he afraid of anything that could potentially harm him? Look at some other characters' weaknesses for ideas if you have to. But you need a few more.
2)
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Ripped from chest to calf, his legs were built for running.
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Ripped?
And for the record, all legs were built for running; some people just choose not to indulge that gift.
3) Just take those six spells out altogether and save them somewhere on your computer. When you are granted an upgrade, then you can add them in. But for right now, just take those out of the bio altogether.
4)Bio doesn't really have a satisfactory ending. Just write a little blurb about what Rain's up to in the present time. Like, most people end with their character wandering away from their home/family for whatever reason.
Nice effort, so I hope after these, you can get out there! ^_^