Thread: Night's Assailants: Valkyrian
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Old 06-14-2006, 07:12 AM
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Re: Night's Assailants: Valkyrian
I have just read the first chapter and I must say, I am impressed with it. I think your writing style is pretty good as well.

There were a few things that could be checked in it though, spelling wise. :XD
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