*pokes the Shade*

All Is Lost And Lost Have All: The way you compare the ploys of romance to a card game creates quite a beautiful imagery. I especially like how you describe the conscious damaging of relationship and the subsequent making-up as dealings of the deck, and with each hand, the relationship becomes ever more fragile: "Shall we play again, or are the cards too fragile?"

Orionism: A very dark piece, but I like it. You can see fury in the person's thoughts, and yet the presence of twisted joy is disturbingly portrayed.

Keep this up, oh Master of the Dark Arts

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