View Single Post
  #23 (permalink)   [ ]
Old 06-13-2006, 06:00 PM
Szerenade Canada Szerenade is offline
Sage of Wisdom
Join Date: Jun 2005
Location: Ontario, Canada
View Posts: 1,247
Re: The Noble Exhumed -- Nightmares Pile Like Bodies

The Tradeoff is moving and very beautifully written, with vivid imagery and a poignant "Wait" in the midst.

All Is Lost And Lost Have All seems to spiral into despair, but I can't help but wait for a glimmer of hope somewhere.

Orionism seems both dark and light to me. Light is portrayed as an elusive quality. I especially enjoyed the last line.
Last Edited by Aurora; 06-13-2006 at 06:06 PM. Reason: Reply With Quote