
06-11-2006, 10:20 AM
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are you suggesting that pants migrate?
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Re: Quest of Curses: The Eternal Desert
it was good. i think you have potential, and i cant wait for the next chapter. that was pretty funny, fighting naked lol. um just one thing though, when he was pushing over the pillars that seemed impossible considering you said that if he were to punch someone his own age, it wouldnt even hurt them. just try to fix that in later chapters.
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