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Old 05-25-2006, 10:08 AM
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I'm drawing a comic called I Shall Be. I really need help on my plot. Here's what I've got so far.

"I can never forget...what she said to me..." says main charecter, Ashley. She is reflecting on what has previously happened in her life. Her parents have gotten a divorce, and shortly after her dad dies in a car accident. Her mother exclaims, "This is all your fault. We divorced...because of you. He died...because of you. I hate you. You ruined my life...your friend's life...everyone you know...go away. Now!" So she ends up in her room with the door locked...staring out the window crying. Watching the rain clouds roll in.

Hmm...as you can see, I need help. I need a good reason for her to be the cause of everything. I would really appreciate your help. Constructive criticism please.

Anybody? Anyone have any ideas?
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