I just finished reading this, and I really enjoyed it. I really liked the conciseness of it; you were able to effectively get your points across without a lot of overbearing, unnecessary, flowery language. And while that sort of language can be good at times, I feel that the way you handled this particular story was excellent. The overall structure really fits Cadenza's personality. Wonderful job. I look forward to seeing more from you in the near future. ^_^

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