Chapter three is NOT crap. It was all great! I love your concept here. It's short and concise, yet I don't feel like things are being rushed. That's what I love to see!

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[These Guys Will Show You Inescapable Doom]

"Maybe it's the sum of a million coincidences we don't quite control that brings us to a particular place
at a particular time, or maybe it's the choices we make, the actions we take. If there's one thing I've learned in 85 years, it's
that what we want doesn't always matter. But then again, sometimes it's all that does." - Mick St. John