Thread: (Fan/Act) The Sixth Architect [M]
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Old 02-16-2006, 02:54 PM
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Re: (Fan/Act) The Sixth Architect [M]
A very good beginning--with the right blend of character development, imagery, and rising action. You know just enough about what's going on to paint a picture in your head, but not so much that you have a clue as to what will happen next.

Good job.
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