OOC: I'd say it's gotten slightly worse. There's nothing really worse about it, it's just that you don't seem to find the need for seperating your posts into paragraphs anymore.

BIC: Nenshou closed his eyes as the sound of something sharp tearing through flesh echoed across the clearing.

"Hmph, why don't the two of you stay dead!" came a voice. Nenshou opened his eyes to find that Gorin had gotten in the way of the blow.

The demon's blade was deep inside Gorin's shoulder, his powerful muscles keeping the blade from going any deeper. The echo had a grimace on his face, but showed no other signs of feeling the pain.

Gorin had held one blade in front of him and thrown the other one. The result, Shanz had impaled himself on Gorin's blade, and the one the echo threw had stabbed Iruki between the eyes.

Both demons turned to dust and blew away. Gorin knew that this wasn't going to be the last time he'd have to face his former allies.

Toka was gone, the coward had seen his minions destroyed and knew that he would be next. Gorin and Nenshou were the only two people remaining in the clearing.

Suddenly, the Oblivion Master fell down to his knees. The sword had caused much more damage than the echo would admit, so he forced himself back onto his feet.

"That was a good job there..." Gorin said. Each word came with amazing agony, as the wound started to throb with more and more pain.

OOC: Meh, sorry for the short post.

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Originally Posted by Ciroton Ciroton (3:30:08 PM): D'aww aiko called me intellegant. xD

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