OoC: I gotta do a short one too..But yes, would you say my writing improved?

BIC: Nenshou threw two fuuma at the beast and spun around in the air and threw two more, each one hitting the winged demons. All of his clones were destroyed. Gorin poised, making a sword. Nenshou threw kunai, one after one, darting the winged demons. Gorin took on the bigger one, swinging his giant sword down. The beast dodged it and struck, but Nenshou made about 300 clones get in the way first, stopping the beast's lumbering fist. It staggered and fell. Nenshou did a backflip and slid backwards a few feet on the land, back to back with Gorin.
"Time to kick it up a notch," he said, taking a scroll out of his pocket and chanting various words.
"Hold them off, when I'm finished...You'll see."