No. I'm going to be honest with you.

You could use a bit of practice... what program are you using?

And yes, your first two are definatley much better.

And some friendly advice... even though red is easy to see on blue, or vice versa, it stands out and draws attention away from the picture and to the font. It's horrible. Stop using red.

Try searching for some nice backgrounds or abstracts, and use them. Play around with the images, and try not to make the choppy, or a small square image randomly placed somewhere.

Sorry if it was a bit harsh. You just needed some real opinion, none of that crap 'ya ur great start 1 ull get lotz of bisiness!!1'