Okay. This is better, but I still have a few problems.

1) I'm not sure if it was there before, but I just noticed a teleportation ability listed under Strengths. I have three words for it: no, no, and no. As things stand, you could use that to pop up behind someone and club them over the head before they have a chance to react. Put a limiter on it. Better, remove it.

2) You haven't done what I asked for his Skills/Magic. Just putting that his attacks need time to charge in the Weaknesses isn't enough, although the blood thing does help. But I suggest you have the attacks themselves drain him in some way beyond that, too.

So, yeah. Knock off the teleportation and tack on a few downsides for the magic. Other than that, no problems.

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