Have you read through the stickies, Bobby Emerald? This guy is far too strong for the BA right now.

1) Add in some more weaknesses. Having bad balance and attacks that "aren't as strong unless he trains" just plain isn't enough.

2) Tone down the Skills/Magic section. A lot. Those things are a) far too powerful, and b) have no weaknesses or vulnerabilities attacheds to them. For every power you keep, I want to see a downside for it added.

3) Work on the bio. It's not very detailed right now. How did he train for those eight years? Who did he train with? And the meteor strike on Earth...um...I'm not too sure about that, either. But I guess you can keep it if you really want.

4) All this, and the kid is only fifteen? That doesn't quite add up.