Hello, Jordan! 'Old Ronnie Schnuckleworth' was a great poem. It was quite good, both the first stanza and last are outstanding and I think topform. It is a very sad poem, but realistically and sympathetically written, which is a huge plus for this poem. Also the line:
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Old Ronnie Schnuckleworth travelled further than he'd ever dared to
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Was an excellent one. I think it is one of the best pieces you've written. Hope to see more soon!