I may have stated this earlier in this thread, but I can't remember and it needs to be said again. Each one of these characters needs some... more than some they need a lot, because this is getting ri-freakin'-diculous (by some I of course mean sexually related things). The next chapter should start off like this, "bow chica bow wow..." I think I'll let you take it from there.
I'm kidding of course, but know that I am eagerly awaiting the next installment.