Everything checks out to me. You might want to take a look at this sentence, though:

"Bella is by no means she; in fact, she's usually the center of attention."

If I'm thinking right, you probably meant to say something like this:

"Bella is by no means shy; she, in fact, is usually the center of attention."

Nice, well-thought-out character. *stamps with approval*

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