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Originally Posted by §oul Link
i like the writing....very long though, try cutting ur next one into chapers, most people in ZU have the attention span of a squirll on staroids. |
Ah, §oul Link, i believe you missed an important part of my writing; the part where I said it was Chapter One
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Originally Posted by Lancer
Very good, EA. Well written, well planned, and LONG! If this first chapter is anything to go by, the story should be excellent. Keep it up!
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And that I shall, Lancer. Many thanks.