Beautiful descriptions and great attention to details. The story is fairly organized and I didn't get bored reading it. It's also a good thing that you've put a space between the characters' dialogue exchange, since the first chapter was way too cramped up for me to read the whole thing comfortably. Keep up the good work, Shrub.

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