Heh heh, thanks for your criticisms. Especially about that mile 6 thing. I'll make a few changes, thanks.
About more details on the war, I was planning on bringing up more details on the war over time rather than just cramming the prolouge full of information. Also, the bulk of the book isn't going to take place in the war at all, but in the corrupt city, Pegasus.
Anyway, thanks Virtigo and Xeranos. I appreciate you reading it and helping me out.

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