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(Fan/Act/Hor/Rom/Tra) "Tale of Three Bothers" [M]
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08-02-2005, 01:03 PM
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Re: (Fan/Act/Hor/Rom/Tra) "Tale of Three Bothers" [M]
Well there's a lot of talking - but very little in the way of explaining why any of this is happening. The characters and conversations are okay and believable. The action is interesting and all - but again why? It's hard to sustain interest without a little more information as to why things are happening.
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