Awesome, amazing, just as the first time I read it. The only thing that would have you do is put 2 spaces between your paragraphs. It makes it muych more easy and appealing to read. Fore example:

Instead of:

I didnt know what was going on, "kill the fool!" they said, working at my chains, "he must die!"
Suddenly, guns fired in the distance. "What the hell was that?!" I yelled.

Try:
I didnt know what was going on, "kill the fool!" they said, working at my chains, "he must die!"

Suddenly, guns fired in the distance. "What the hell was that?!" I yelled.

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