I'm sorry, I'm not quite sure what you are trying to do. I wouldn't qualify this as a story or Ficiton of any sort. I will have to close this thread at this time.

Since you are new ZeldasShadow, please read the Newbies Guide, and skim through the rules. Those should both help you out a ton.
If you need any help please feel free to PM me.
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