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Old 07-14-2005, 01:08 PM
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Re: The Chaos Inside My Head

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Originally Posted by Milhouse
Here they come, you cannot run. No more happiness, laughter or fun. Feel yourself slip into the cold dark shadows where evil lurks. Who ever thought youd be a part of these crazy quirks? Your soul gently cries as the final moments are near, while the rest of your body is filled with fear. Theres no going back, you must continue on. The life you once knew and loved is now gone.
Please can you explain the purpose of this thread? I predict its a poem of some sort. Very interesting, with riddles in. Nice work, though I have an incling this may be in the wrong place. It makes sense even though it rhymes! Which is a rare thing, so anyway, nice job Ending is sad and symapthetic. Favourite bit:

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Your soul gently cries as the final moments are near, while the rest of your body is filled with fear.
So thats what its like to have a Chaos in your head? Nasty.
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