Eij: what i meant by the rape comment was that the piece ended with the implied rape of this woman, then some child escaping. it seemed as if they came to rape her, then cover it by killing any witnesses. of course it isnt the story, but it just seemed that way with this particular piece.
anyway, nice work with the update. there are a few gramatical errors in it, but overall it is very well done and much more informative, though now there are only more confusing things for the people who don't know what they are
