I quite liked this poem, Evil Tomato. You've got some talent here. A wonderfully written piece about how others perceive you and what their intentions are. The bit

"I wonder now,
how you would have appeared
had I thought to look"

is a bit awkwardly phrased for mine. I don't know what it is about it. It's probably just me.

I give this poem a healthy three and a half sporks out of five.

Keep bringing in some more poems!

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