Art of Jango

ive decided to make an art thread. this is my battle arena character Kiray. please post and tell me how it is

He's cool. I don't know anything about the battle arena, but he seems capable of destruction. What is he exactly?

Man you must have a pretty awful scanner, because that is really hard to see. Even when I squint I can't tell anything...

Wish I could give some kind of constructive criticism, but I can't.

Yea know Tenwaka is right, but I can make it out, and I'm not gonna lie.

You need to practice more, your contur is pretty bad, very unrealitic, but if you keep practicing which will be the only way you'll get better I'm sure you can pull something neat off.

And if you can't draw people try other things, like cars, graffiti art, abstract Or just strait up basic anime. Anyone can learn that, and be decent at it. Its shapes, and routine. You can find tutorials all over the web.

yeah its a little sketchy. im doing this thread to see what other people think and how i need to improve. heres another one i call it the Death Soldier

He's cool, but he looks a little bit weak...well I haven't seen you fight...and I'm not back in the battle forum yet...but maybe in the near future we can find out...