Ah, okay. Definitely not! More overt lyrics definitely go well with music, especially if the lyrics have meaning (which they do here).
Out of the one you just posted, I liked the last verse the best by far. Definitely delivered on what the first two were promising. One thing:
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At last it is found in the self that all is holographic
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I think it might work better with make "it is" "it's." But I would need to know the flow of the song, really.