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Originally Posted by Caleb  Hi, Zatchara! I'm glad you opened up a shop here! |
Hi
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This looks really good, but the focal point is...I don't know, hard to look at. My eyes keep looking at the effects flowing out of him instead of at him. Sharpening him should help that.  |
Well, this render was rather difficult to work with. Seeing as how Walshy doesn't have many pictures of himself not slapped on a stock picture, I was a bit limited to what I could work with. This particular render was cut out of a picture of him standing in a desert, hence the light beaming on his face.
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The main thing here is that you covered up the face. That's generally something you shouldn't do, although here because of the effects you were using it makes sense. Your use of light is amazing, though. |
Eh, I didn't cover it up too much and it went along with the style I was going for, what with the C4D's covering up his body. As far as displaying the render goes, I wanted to get the 'X' and at least the majority of his face visible, to get the point across of who it was.
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It's really cool how you picked the four main colors and put those in those rectangles on the side. It makes a nice accent. Use of light here is pretty stunning as well, and I like how you used the bubble c4d, but not so it looked half transparent. |
People tend to only use bubbles for lighting these days, so I wanted to try something different with them.
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Originally Posted by Caleb Alright, so next I'd like to talk about your header images, lol.
They're huge xD
The biggest limit to not be resized by ZU is 670 width, but staying with 600 is generally safe. It would make your thread much easier to read and browse through if you knocked out that extra transparent space above and below the text, and then resized them down to 600 width. |
I was juggling quite a bit when I made them and figured they would suffice until I had the proper time to edit everything. Sized down now.
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Originally Posted by Caleb All in all I'm glad you've opened a shop and I like your work, I hope you continue to produce works just as good!  |
Thanks for the welcome, as well as the critiques.