Ok, first off, the strengths and weaknesses are good. But it would be better if you stretched them out a little. I'd like to explain more about them. If you have to, just make them larger strengths or weaknesses or add a new one for each. They're actually well done, but I just find them short.

Now, for skills, I want you to explain hand to hand combat. Are we talking martial arts? boxing? street fighting? wrestling? what? Explain what kind of hand to hand combat and perhaps how good he is at it.

I'm also having trouble with the name. You can't tell us his real name, but perhaps you could give him an AKA or a nickname. Just to save people the hassle of typing all that.

Fix that up please.