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Originally Posted by shadow226  You described the boat well, and some description of the characters. However things like facial features have been left out as well as the clothes most of them wear. As I said before I don't like the swearing. It doesn't fit in the zelda universe and I generaly don't like it anyway. Also I felt it was a bit crude for a fanfiction of zelda. But that's me.
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Being pirates they kinda have the right to curse...
I'm one of the few people who like it when Fanfictions curse. The cursing gives the characters humanity, gives them flaws.
I also like the idea of Link and Tetra's relationship expanding to such great lengths. As I'm writing my newest Fanfic, The Curse of Ikana, there's going to be a lot of negativety, so it's good to read some positive writing. Good Work!!!
Seriously, Keep writing!