That was good writing in my opinion, you have good control of the language Phoenix. It lso posesses that quality to where most people (guys) can relate to it in some form. And to Fiend10 it shouldn't matter if it's true, look at it as art or a story, not as his journal. Keep up the good work Phoenix (or just tell her, jeez... you don't want to hit summer regretting not having said something)

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