My emotastic poem..Trinity of Murder.

Keep in mind, I'm not sane...

The Trinity of Murder

The only God you knew
Has cast you away
And made you a victim
Of your own foul play.

Now you have nothing to do,
But sit and cry all day,
And forever wonder
If after all your work
Things will go your way

So take the fruit of your labor
From the harvest of hell
And tell me that your dying wish
Is to be with me as well.

Let me take up your crucifix
And all your pain
Now show me all your sins and scars
And hope I do the same

Now the time has come
For the deed to be done
Pray you’re not caught
For all you have
Is the trinity of murder
To get you through this disorder.

Take it up
There’s no turning back
The time has come
There’s no courage to lack.

God is the gun on your dashboard
Jesus is the eternal bullets lord
And the Holy Spirit of murder
Is the magnitude of this misunderstood

In the name of the father
And of the son
And of the Holy Spirit
Amen.

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I know that this would be like a major sin and **** in real life, but I don't believe that, and it's just a poem.

That's a cool poem Mirror-Image. Very Dark. You're a good writer. Make sure you keep at it. Writing's a wonderful way to express yourself and it's a lot of fun! :cool:

That was a really good poem. You are a pretty good writer. You should put that poem into the poem thread. Good Job.

Very cool and dark, in a good way, but I wonder if your starting to take your skepticism of religion a bit too far, but it works.

btw, what's emotastic? :confused:

Greatly emo.

I love poetry and this is very good, the "dark" style and feeling very captivating indeed, since being a fan of Elgar Allan Poe I am always on the look out for talent and yes you have it my friend