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Re: The changed world.
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maybe like this? shattered The clouds warped The grass faded and life disappeared. As the people watched, Time stood still. On that day the world changed... from magic and joy to money and slay Truthfully I like it, very ominous, but sometimes (especially with poetry) how you present your idea, can make it that much more powerful to the reader. (hope you dont mind I corrected a few spelling errors too)
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Last edited by achitka; 03-22-2005 at 08:59 PM.. Reason: Cause I'm a loon |

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