Interestingly enough, I have no idea what a staccato is or what I did there! But again, thank you. I have to say, I'm honestly surprised how deep you took my first poem there. It was my first attempt at writing a freeform poem and I didn't expect someone would receive it so well. Honestly I just kinda let it go with the flow.

If any of you are curious, my favorite poet (and biggest inspiration for a good deal of things) is Jim Morrison. Here is some of his poetry. I wonder if any of him is showing up in my poetry? I think so.




This little guy came to me this morning like as soon as I woke up. Didn't want to bump the topic so I'm editing it in.

He and she were meant to be
He and she we all see
He and she minus me
He and she eternity